Theodore Roethke
By day the bat is cousin to the mouse.
He likes the attic of an aging house.
His fingers make a hat about his head.
His pulse beat so low we think him dead.
He loops in crazy figures half the night
Among the trees that face the corner light.
But when he brushes up against a screen,
We are afraid of what our eyes have seen:
For something is amiss or out of place
When mice with wings can wear a human face.
I think the speaker of this poem is a person who witnesses a bat everyday. The person's description of the bat is very descriptive, so he must have seen the bat quite a few times to fully capture the picture of the bat. The diction of this poem is interesting and unique. I can picture the bat looping in crazy figures, as it says in the poem, "He loops in crazy figures half the night..." I can also picture the old attic in a dusty, old house, as it says in the poem, "He likes the attic of an aging house." I can also picture myself being very scared when a big bat just comes up to a screen, and you are just maybe 3 inches away from it, but with a thin screen in between you, as it says in the poem, "But when he brushes up against a screen, we are afraid of what our eyes have seen:..." The imagery of the poem is a very clear picture in my head. The author of this poem uses very good words, I can picture the whole scene in my head. There is not really any figurative language in this poem, but the poem is still really good and fun to read. A pattern I have realized in this poem is the words on the last line rhyme with the last words on the next sentence. Those are the types of poems I enjoy reading! In the first stanza, mouse rhymes with house, in the second stanza, head rhymes with dead, and so on. I also noticed that each stanza describes a different thing about the bat. In the first stanza, the author describes where the bat likes to be in, and what he is sort of related to. In the second stanza, the author describes his fingers and pulse, which are the bat's characteristics. In the third stanza, the author describes what the bat does in the night and where he does it. In the fourth stanza, the author describes what other people's reactions are when they see the bat up close. In the last stanza, I don't really understand it too much. I don't understand what the author means when he says "When mice with wings can wear a human face." I think it goes back to the first line of the poem when the author says "By say the bat is cousin to the mouse." Then, the author is comparing the mice and the bat again. He is saying "mice with wings that can wear a human face" which I think means the mice look like bats with wings, and "wear a human face" means the mice can also scare humans. I think the meaning of the poem is two things that are not similar can share some similarity traits. The mouse and the bat are not related, but they can both scare humans to death.